I Tried So Hard


Please Forgive Me


You were the best

A man could be


I tried so hard

To love you

But I couldn’t


Please forgive me


I was frozen

I was wounded

I was damaged


Please forgive me

For being the one

Who broke you

And turned you into

A monster

Who only

Wants to break, hurt and punish

Innocent women


A fiction





  1. wow that is intense Laura Bon!

    is there any really innocent however?

    But God!

    • laurabon says:

      Thank so much for the response, David. Truly only God is innocent. The person in the poem was taking revenge on people who were not guilty of hurting him. Blessings 🙏❤️

  2. The Eclectic Contrarian says:

    Raw and real. Laura Bon is a human! I respect that and can/will pray for and with you!

  3. Mark Tulin says:

    Interesting twist to this one.

  4. simplywendi says:

    this is so intensely beautiful Laura……..I can feel the pain and sadness.

  5. Hmmm very intense and heart-wretching :'( I weep with you my sister! God loves us forever and will never leave us nor forsake us! <3

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